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[Draft 2] Goners Who Loved Too Much
morally gray, going to hell, i have weird thoughts
yetregressing
Title: Goners Who Loved Too Much
Universe: I Know What You Did, collection of short stories in 2nd person (haha I'm so clever)
Draft: 2nd
Word count: 1838 words
Summary: Your mother had an affair with the man in the photograph...
Commentary: The first of two pieces I wrote for creative writing in second person. Also yes, I literally title all my pieces after Jeffrey Foucault lyrics.

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[Final] Conquer Paradise to Let it Burn: Ripping through Labels to Find a Self
morally gray, going to hell, i have weird thoughts
yetregressing
Title: Conquer Paradise to Let it Burn: Ripping through Labels to Find a Self
Universe: n/a
Draft: final
Word count: 1103 words
Summary: A search for a self, beginning with the smallest boxes.
Commentary: I know this is technically non-fiction, but I felt like I needed to share and I never use this community anyway, so. :| Don't judge me, I do what I want.

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[Draft] -untitled-
writing
yetregressing
Title: -as yet untitled-
Universe: n/a
Draft: 1rst
Word count: 1,943 words
Summary: ...
Commentary: I think I'm just overwhelmed by what needs to be fixed I can't focus at all on one thing at a time. I've looked over it twice now, fixed maybe one or two things, but I'm still seriously poking at it. Rawr.

Inside this fantasy, it seems so real to me...Collapse )

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